Revised screenplay. After feedback from Ruby i need to go back and get specific about some things before I submit it for review.
int. study - day
It is a bright afternoon, the sun is
streaming into a small study room, shelves filled with statues and video game
boxes. Against the back wall is a large desk with a computer. To one side is a
big, comfy looking armchair with a side table. HUMAN is at the computer; their
back is to us wearing headphones. KITTY is curled up on the armchair.
Human
(Random grunting)
armchair
GHOSTIE pops into view with a flourish. She
looks around, her expression brightening when she spots Kitty. She floats over
and pokes Kittys head. Kitty wakes with a start, glares at Ghostie then
stretches while yawning and curls back up with his back to her.
study
Ghostie’s face screws up with displeasure
and scans the room. Her eyes land on a glass sitting on the side table and is
struck by an idea.
side table
Ghostie tries to push the glass and is
happily surprised when it moves. The noise catches Kitty’s attention making him
sit up and resume glaring at her. Ghostie approaches Kitty and waves her arms
suggestively at him, but he just swipes at her.
Kitty
(Hisses)
Ghostie is not impressed, her expression
turns mischievous and she goes back to pushing the glass off the table. Kitty
starts to panic and leaps to save the glass. He is holding the glass up with
his paws when Ghostie disappears.
painting
Ghostie reappears by a large painting on
the wall. She tugs up on the painting, trying to lift it off the hook. Kitty,
fully panicked, leaps into view and hangs off the bottom of the painting. The
painting settles back into place and Kitty now has his claws stuck in the
frame.
study
ghostie
(giggling)
Ghostie floats over to the bookshelf and
begins to push books onto the floor. Kitty is frantically trying to unstick
himself, eventually succeeding and dropping to the floor.
bookshelf
Kitty scrambles up the bookshelf determined
to catch the pesky ghost. When he reaches the top he swipes at her, only to
unbalance himself and cause the bookshelf to tip over with a large crash.
study
Ghostie disappears in the blink of an eye.
Kitty pokes his head up through the shelves, surrounded by books. The first
thing he sees is his owner standing over him, with a disapproving look on his
face, pointing towards the door.
Kitty heaves a big sigh and begins walking
slowly towards the door. He pauses halfway to look back longingly at the
armchair and then his owner. His owner is unmoved, so Kitty continues out the
door, with a happy looking Ghostie following behind him.
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