Attempt 2 at a story treatment. My first story was a bit all over the place, so this time its simplified down, and the focus is directly on the ghost and the kitty interactions causing chaos in the room. I think after reading the feedback on my first story, that I was trying to cram too many storylines into one, and it didnt actually make a concise story. I also had a crossover between a realistic situation and cartoon which makes it harder to bond with the main character. This new story hopefully makes the reader/viewer feel sorry for the kitty and what its been through.
Step outline, I think I did it correctly?
concept art for Kitty and Ghostie
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